Dr. Jamie Bondage

front of him stood a large door, one half of which was slightly ajar. For some reason, this doesn't flow well in my mind...I don't think the one half bit ...

I hated being around a lot of students. And all the freshman coming in didn't help much. I frowned. I could leave, but then I'd have to cross the path ...

1. The Pizza Reef was downstairs in the food court of the mall, right in between Panda Express and The Great Potato. Which meant that our lines were always the ...

Spaces! Spaces are good! I promise. =p 1. "The basement is cold today, because it’s raining outside and there’s no heating system. The place is pretty much an icebox today" ...

Again, double space. It helps the reader. XD Good addition...they all seem a little short to me...and more descriptions would be nice. I didn't see any gramatical errors. XD Keep ...

Well, it seems that everyone else has gotten here before I did...=p So...I don't know if this is going to help or not, but I'm going to give it a ...

1. The thing many fear because they think it is the end of all life. Some want because they believe they will see loved ones that have already died. Others ...

Name: Alexus (female) Race: Witch Element: Fire Appearance: (My avatar) 5' 5", skinny, in shape. Personality: Easily angered. She's a fighter and enjoys flirting. She laughs a lot, but is ...

Huddled in the corner of the library, I sat with the latest wizard book on my lap. Speed reading it, flipping page after page, filing away each new one. I ...

Name: Amira (Am-mir-a) Correl (Cor-el) Age: 16 Species: Mind reader/sorceror Grade: 10th Eyes: Hazel Hair: Brown and shoulder length, normally up, so most people don't see it. History: Only child, ...

(anyone can bring me in...but it's probably too late...but I won't be able to get on a lot...:( Sorry all! Just get rid of my character if it's too late...)

Name: Alexus (Alex) Race: Human/part witch (unknowingly) Age: 16 Orientation: Men Eyes: Hazel Hair: Brown, short, shoulder length. Heighth: 5'5" Body type: Thin, with strong leg and stomach muscles Pe

I continued to worry. What was taking them so long? I knew the story...I had seen it happen...felt the pain that this other wizardress had gone through. Mind reading could ...

Her eyes glistened with the reflection of the morning sun as it rose high into the sky. Anticipation coarsed through her exasted body, sending pulses of energy running through it, ...

"Thanks..." I bit my lip. I wished there was someone I could help. I knew something was wrong in the other wizardress' mind, but I did not want to invade ...